Showing posts with label poems. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poems. Show all posts

Friday, 13 March 2015

Exploring onomatopoeia!

We had lots of fun today preparing for writing our weather poems. We learnt all about onomatopoeia and thought about which words sound like different kinds of weather.

Here are the zig-zag books we made!













We shared our books with our friends...






Which of these words will you use in your weather poem?


Friday, 24 January 2014

What's in the toy box?

The Wrens have been writing more toy poems! We looked at a poem written by Trevor Millum and this inspired us to create our own versions. Here are some snippets of the poems we wrote:


What's in the toy box?

What's in the toy box?
What's in the box?
What's in the box 
With the big brass locks?



There's a crane
And a really fast train,


There's a silver clock
And a shiny rock,


Some lego bricks 
And an x-box one,


There's some beautiful hearts
And a lovely piece of art,


There's a gigantic mat
And a fan that flaps,


Some red bouncing balls
And a massive swimming pool,


There's some people who walk
And a teddy bear that talks,


A shiny white Ford
And a swimming award,


There's some shoes to wear
And a grizzly bear,


There's a bus that is green
And a house that is clean,


There's a monster truck
And a yellow duck,


There's a cute little cat
And a dancing mat,


There's some remote control trains
And a flying plane,


There's a dumper truck
And a red and black duck,


There's a wooden sign
And a white and black combine,


There's a red ted
And a blue bed,


Some clowns that frown
And a king that sings,

Some dolls wearing hats
And a rounder's bat,

Some crowns that glow
And a machine that sews,

There's a big dino
And a fierce rhino.

That's what's in the toy box!
That's what's in the box!

You can tell by our faces that we are very proud of the poems that we wrote!

Well done Wrens!!!


Thursday, 26 January 2012

It's raining, it's pouring!

We have linked our learning in Literacy to the work we are doing in Geography by using our senses to describe what the weather looks, sounds and feels like.

When we came into school on Friday we were all very wet!  We saw this as an opportunity to write some rainy day poetry.


Some of us wrote phrases that we could turn into poems whilst others decided they wanted to get straight on with the poetry writing itself!   

Listen to some the lovely descriptions of the rain that we wrote.

Some of us included some rhymes - can you hear them?











We will post some more of our fantastic poetry very soon!